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Thank you for writing up an application Rogue, but there are still some issues that need to be addressed. Firstly certain parts of your application are not in the correct order such as "Please write a back story of how your character became the CCA Unit you are(A Few good lines)
Please write a 10 - 15 line role play as a CCA Unit (the more you write, the better)." You also have some incorrect information throughout, such as previously being stated the inclusion of OTA, the combine mainly used their gunships and stryders rather than ground based soldiers. Other issues are just relative to context, I would appreciate it if you expanded on your nationality, birth place and the various locations throughout your back story. Remember city 17 is in eastern Europe, so if you are not from eastern Europe make sure you back up your reasoning for being there. Once the necessary changes are made I will re-evaluate your application. (This isn't really a bad thing but your application is very similar to war of the worlds.) |
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Bump , my app was never re evaluated.
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You mention being born in 2001? In our cannon the seven hour war occurred in 2000 and officially in valve's half life 2 it occurred between 2000 to 2009, meaning you would be either be dead or a very young child. I cannot accept the application for a character that shouldn't exist please fix this.
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fixed
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You have written your future in your back story. Your character starts as a recruit you cannot write that they were a grid etc.
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might have actually edited it fully
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Accepted, message me in game to receive your white list.
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