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Rayler's CCA Application 10 years, 9 months ago #163373

Steam Name:⇱Rayler⇲
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:32212838
Why do you want to become a CCA Unit?
Well i have seen people running around and attacking others so i would like to become a CCA Unit

What are your characters special abilities and disabilities?
He runs fast and cant jump really high.

What kind of personality does your character give?
He is a nice person to others mostly of the times and he wouldnt like to hurt anyone.

What are you expected to do in the CCA?
Keep security in the City 18, obey the leaders, and give lessons to the Citizens that disobey.

How do you think the CCA will be like for you?
I was a Civil Protection Unit once in a server called CatMafia its really good that we say being a Civil Protection Unit it would be nice if i become one again im really trained so i can give others a really good RP Experience

Please write a back story of how your character became the CCA Unit you are(A Few good lines)

Ruben Sweyker was a teen criminal at first but then he saw a CCA beating a citizen then Ruben Sweyker laughed at the citizen and then a CCA came up behind him and began to hit Ruben with his stunstick.

Ruben woke up in the Nexus in the interrogation room and a DvL told him that they were using a Scanner to look at his abilities and the DvL asked him to join the CCA Team then Ruben was surprised he was thinking on the stuff he could do as a CCA Unit then he looked at the DvL and said Yes...I'll join the CCA sir when i should start? The CCA Unit said Now.

And now Ruben Sweyker is doing justice in the City 18 killing the rebels and beating the citizens that disobey.

Please write a 10 - 15 line roleplay as a CCA Unit (the more you write, the better):

Citizen:Officer! I saw a guy on the bridge!
Me:/me looks at the bridge
Me:/me Sees citizen on the bridge
Me:/me quickly goes in the 45th apartment and goes up stairs to the bridge
Me:/me opens the door
Citizen 2:Shit!
Citizen 2:/me quickly runs to the slums
Me:/me runs after the citizen and pulls out pistol
Me:/me makes sure i have ammo and aims at the Citizen 2
Me:/me attempts to shoot the citizen in the stomach
Me:/roll Rolled 54 out of 100
Citizen 2:/roll Rolled 87 out of 100
Me:/me pulls the trigger and misses shoot
Citizen 2:/me trips
Me:/me reaches the Citizen 2 and attempts to tie (resist?)
Citizen 2:/me doesnt resist
Me:/me ties up Citizen 2 and checks if he has contraband
Me:/me finds a gun
Me:/radio Reaper, citizen with illegal contraband. Should i detain or amputate?
Reaper:/radio Detain suspect and bring to Nexus. I will deal with this myself

<<IC>>
Name:Ruben Sweyker
CID:93527
Hair Color:Black
Eye Color:Blues
Facial Hair:None
Gender:Male
Race:Hispanic
Height:159
Weight:58
Distinguishing Marks:No
Do you have any affiliation with the CCA? No
List previous fields you are experienced in:Student

Explain the reason you want to enlist in the CCA:I havent seen many CCA patroling and i would like to become one CCA and make justice so i can give a better experience while playing.

Have you received any infractions from an officer? If yes, explain.(Blank for the moment)

Do you understand the consequences if you are to betray the CCA? (Public Amputation)
I do understand
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Last Edit: 10 years, 9 months ago by Rayler. Reason: Update the App
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Re: Rayler's CCA Application 10 years, 9 months ago #163385

+Support.
This man is an excellent RP-er ingame, and is a great fit for the job.
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Re: Rayler's CCA Application 10 years, 9 months ago #163426

App seems a little short...

Neutral.
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Re: Rayler's CCA Application 10 years, 9 months ago #163473

Could certainly use more work, but I'm not one to judge. With a little improvement, this could be an excellent app.
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Oh, did you need that head? Oops...
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Re: Rayler's CCA Application 10 years, 9 months ago #163518

Yeah well my native language is Spanish i didnt know what to do i tried to do my best and make it longer.
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Re: Rayler's CCA Application 10 years, 9 months ago #163572

Kozak wrote:
App seems a little short...

Neutral.


I agree.

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Last Edit: 10 years, 9 months ago by AllenMacKay.
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Re: Rayler's CCA Application 10 years, 9 months ago #163726

Updated App RolePlay as CCA
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Re: Rayler's CCA Application 10 years, 9 months ago #163729

Neutral, the app is short but that's not the problem. We welcome all races to come play but if you aren't fluent in the language it's going to be extremely hard to rp effectively without bringing everyone out of character with awful grammar. This is a personal opinion. As for the application, try using full sentences. If there is a sentence that you have trouble with google part of it, it should give you proper suggestions as to how to form the sentence. Also capitalize your "i", in it's current state it looks very rushed.
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Re: Rayler's CCA Application 10 years, 9 months ago #163736

I'll try to, you actually did help me with that post (don't ask how:) )
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Re: Rayler's CCA Application 10 years, 9 months ago #164848

The reason for why you want to become a CCA unit is a bit too short, so is your backstory
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