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Zooberseb's Vortiguant Application 10 years, 9 months ago #162399

Steam Name : [Bob][Rv3]Zooberseb

Steam Id : STEAM_0:0:40915071

Why do you want the vortigaunt whitelist? : I woud like the vortiguant whitelist as it allows for deeper roleplay. I have seen only two vortiguant around at a time and would like to add to the small list of people that play as a vortiguant. Also Vortiguants are my favroite NPC's in Half Life!

What do you do as an enslaved vortigaunt? : I do everything the combine tells me. Whether I like it or not.

What do you do as a Free vortigaunt? : As a free vortiguant I aid the rebels in their fight for freedom.

Write a backstory for your vortigaunt (The more you write the better) :

We fought, with a burning passion, and bitter hearts.Yet the Combine never seemed to back down, they never weakened, they were just too strong. So we made our way to Xen, the Land of the Homeless. We hid. We fought. We were hanging on by threads, our backs to the wall, completely cornered. Then suddenly, some type of Dimensional Rift. Nihilanth commanded us to go in. As we passed through, many other creatures followed, the worst being a creature that latches onto heads and turns them into grotesque monsters. Not long after, a man named "The Freeman" defeated Nihilianth! We were free, yet trapped, on a war riddled planet, The Combine had arrived, the weak leaders of the humans, "The Wallace Breen" surrendered themselves and is the Combine's puppet now. He advertises the Combine and newly formed Overwatch as "good." Do good men keep slaves? As thats what my people and I have become, slaves. Although few, some have escaped and joined the Rebels. Many stories have passed of them, they supposedly fight alongside "The Freeman." One day, I will fight alongside "The Freeman" too, for the Humans Freedom, and the Freedom my race has not had for eons.

Write a few vortigaunt rp situation's (The more you write the better) :
<:: Ic Section ::>

"A normal day"
(Gunfire)
(Cries as people watch the public decapitation of a Rebel)
CCA: Throw out this body mutt!
Biotic: Yesss..Maassterrrr....
CCA: Hurry up before you get beat!
Biotic: Of coourse...
(CCA walks towards citizens)
CCA: Isolate!
(CCA closely watches as citizens disperse)
(Biotic walks towards Dumpster)
(Biotic opens dumpster and insert body)
CCA: Now come with me Biotic
Biotic: Of course..
(CCA escorts Biotic to cell and locks him in)
CCA: You will remain there until we need something done again.
(CCA walks away)
CCA: Haha

Vortigaunt Name : Gwydonius Falneth

Vortigaunt Age : 102 Human Years

Vortigaunt Height : 6'5

Why does your vortigaunt want to serve the union? : The union provides protection, I would much rather have protecton than in the slums without food and water....for now.

Do you understand that you will be killed If you work with the resistance? : Yes I do understand that I will be killed if I work with the resistance. Most likely in a very brutal way suck as public amputation.


I,Gwydonius Falneth Will server the union as an enslaved biotic.
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Re: Zooberseb's Vortiguant Application 10 years, 9 months ago #162404

Having problems with the back story. You don't really give any insight to your character or how you came to city 18. The lore you use, I'm not sure, is even correct. Finally the Vortigaunt homeworld is not Xen. Oh, and your role play scenes are very unorganized.
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Re: Zooberseb's Vortiguant Application 10 years, 9 months ago #162411

My apologies. I really should freshen up a bit on Half-Life lore. I edited the app a bit. Also reading the wiki.
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Re: Zooberseb's Vortiguant Application 10 years, 9 months ago #162446

More then just a few words needs to be moved around.
Go through this: members.shaw.ca/halflifestory/timeline.htm

Then, I'd suggest a re-write.
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Re: Zooberseb's Vortiguant Application 10 years, 9 months ago #162643

D: I spent an hour overhauling it and of course...I got like auto logged out so when I pressed submit it asked me to sign in....and I just lost ALL of my edited application...\

Anyways thanks for the link. I had an app that DID include accurate lore this time, was damn long too.
Anyways ill redo it later. Thanks alot though boxofrain1! It really helped!
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