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Jonathan Millitans CCA App 10 years, 10 months ago #159944

Steam Name: Jonathan Millitan

Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:42401710

Why do you want to become a CCA Unit?: To Help protect the city against wrong doing citizens.

What are your characters special abilities and disabilities?: Special: Good Aim.,Well trained. Disabilities: None.

What kind of personality does your character give?: strict,following.

What are you expected to do in the CCA?: Protect the city and enforce laws.

How do you think the CCA will be like for you?: They will become well friends and companions.

Please write a back story of how your character became the CCA Unit you are(A Few good lines)
I was walking through the town, and saw someone in the proccess of being mugged. I watched them and thought I wasnt able to help them at all. Than I remembered the CCA and how they could protect the city against wrong doers like so. I than though about it and Here I am.

Please write a 10 - 15 line roleplay as a CCA Unit (the more you write, the better):
MPF: Citizen,
MPF: Apply,
Me: Jonathan Millitan
Me: #123456
MPF: What is your reason for being here?
Me: I wanted to go check out what it was like in here.
MPF:/me Turns on stunstick to high voltage.
Me: /y HELP ME!
Me /me Passes out
MPF: /me Drags Body to jail.

<<IC>>
Name: Jonathan Millitan

CID: Idk it will be generated

Hair Color: Brown

Eye Color: Blue

Facial Hair: None

Gender: Male

Race: Caucasian

Height: 6,3

Weight: 170 lbs

Distinguishing Marks: None

Do you have any affiliation with the CCA?: No

List previous fields you are experienced in: Cooking

Explain the reason you want to enlist in the CCA: To fight with the city and not against.

Have you received any infractions from an officer? If yes, explain.(None)

Do you understand the consequences if you are to betray the CCA? (Public Amputation): Yes I do.
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Re: Jonathan Millitans CCA App 10 years, 10 months ago #159947

-support

This application totally, looks like a joke.
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Re: Jonathan Millitans CCA App 10 years, 10 months ago #159948

Shephard_PL wrote:
-support

This application totally, looks like a joke.


How exactly does it look like a joke?
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Re: Jonathan Millitans CCA App 10 years, 10 months ago #159950

SgtBen wrote:
Shephard_PL wrote:
-support

This application totally, looks like a joke.


How exactly does it look like a joke?


Short backstory and rp example without logic.
There're much more errors, but l'm tired.
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Re: Jonathan Millitans CCA App 10 years, 10 months ago #159988

Mechanic wrote:
I agree with Viking. The back story is extremely weak. You went to the bare minimum with the CCA RP lines, only writing 10 lines. Every Citizen has its disabilities, EVERYONE has disabilities. Its extreme failrp if you dont. Wrong doing citizens? Its anti citizens peter. He obviously has no experience in HL2RP, and doesnt deserve or need this position.
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Re: Jonathan Millitans CCA App 10 years, 10 months ago #159989

I will give some tips here

1. The combines dont use the word " Friends "
2. Your background story is a little lame
3. The only thing you will do as a CCA is obeying your higher ups
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Re: Jonathan Millitans CCA App 10 years, 10 months ago #160031

I agree with Viking and Mechanic. Either you put very little effort in to this application, or you have little experience with HL2 RP.
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Re: Jonathan Millitans CCA App 10 years, 10 months ago #160037

Reventius wrote:
I agree with Viking and Mechanic. Either you put very little effort in to this application, or you have little experience with HL2 RP.



^^^^^^^

No expierience whatsoever.
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Re: Jonathan Millitans CCA App 10 years, 10 months ago #160038

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Re: Jonathan Millitans CCA App 10 years, 10 months ago #160046

Eric Tomson wrote:
I will give some tips here

1. The combines dont use the word " Friends "


This depends on the character, there are no specific ruleset for the units, they are humans too and they are allowed to call eachother friends if they want to, but its not sure the higher ranked will like it.
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