Thanks to Bacon and the rest of the people that was in it

never a good start its just randomness? its lkess a video and more seeing through an eyes of a fp person and it aint lookin good (btw eliminator stop the chav talk its anoing)
1.wouldve been good to remove hud text menu and the little speaky things
2.what on earth is the sory line
3.not asactualy good acting oh no blood on the wall u'd think sum1 would b more supprised

onisly no storyline no good acting

shut up, its just a bit of fun -.-

lol i was just expecting a video not a ramble

No it was just some fun, we didn't do it for oscar nominations.

wasnt expecting that i was expecting the minimum
1.storyline
2.being able to make it half realitic

ofcourse not cuz ur 2 late

If would look better if.
1) Do not use in game voise
2) make sure only 1 person talking at a time
3) remove hud
4) Get a story line or Writer to write you one
5 Do not use chav talk (it's shit in films)
6) Dno't be a stereotype your a ass if you are.
7) Don't put ragdolls in sex position it's sick, sad and it proves you do not have a girl/boy firend
8) STOP PORTRAITING THE CLAN AS BEING BAD PEOPLE WHO KILL, STEAL AND HYJACK
9) use hamachi if you want to make a movie Not the rp server www.filehippo.com/download_hamachi/ ( hamachi is a program that makes your lan server acessable from other friends useing hamachi.
and im done. Thats what should be improved in this film

Okay first of all i uplaoded this for fun so stop going \"it's crap\" we know okay were sorry if were not experts like you

omy siblin carm down every time we joke around and film it you like no story line and blue your like Dont use in game voises and Do not use chav talk (it's shit in films).
We where just joking around.