Steam Name : Wilfred

Steam Id : If you really need it, then ask for it privately

Why do you want the vortigaunt whitelist? : I would like to expand my horizons of rp to the full spectrum. Which includes vortigaunts. Also, the history of the vortigaunt race and what they do enslaved by the combine interests me.

What do you do as an enslaved vortigaunt? : Clean up messes for the combine, and other grunt work. It would maybe involve sweeping, cleaning the streets, fixing things, clean windows, whatever is asked of me from the combine who order me.

What do you do as a Free vortigaunt? : Depending on the rp, i could do anything for anyone or myself as long as its reasonable like helping citizens, hiding/keeping to myself, scavenge for food, any rp situations that would present itself.

Write a backstory for your Vortigaunt (The more you write the better) :
Grakdur 'ung was enslaved by the monster Nihilanth along with the other Vortigaunts of their ancient world. He experienced the first encounter with the combine and he was also their for the shift to the Planet Xen. On Xen a portal was opened to a strange land. Grakdur 'ung, being a coward, remained at Xen as multiple of the other Vorts went through the portal.(To Black Mesa) After a strange creature entered the realm into Xen and destroyed their ruler Nihilanth, Grakdur 'ung was free, but only for a little bit. They were such strange things to him. Grakdur 'ung witnessed as Xen's portals to earth grew and spread more of the inhabitants of Xen over earth. Even with his doubts Grakdur 'ung decided to travel along with his fellow Vorts to this strange place. When he frist traveled to earth, Grakdur 'ung tended to stay alone. He lived in the sewers of a city, the outskirts of small towns, and alone in the forests. He was afraid of the humans originally, but he eventually developed and interest of them. He observed them, and adapted some of their language, but not all of it. After only a small period of peace for the vort people on earth, there was a wave of Combine that entered earth through the rifts created by Nihilanths death. Grakdur 'ung was there for the 7 hour war, and saw many deaths as the combine conquered this world. Grakdur 'ung at this time was living in the outskirts of a small town, where he was learning about the humans secretly. When the combine made it to that village Grakdur 'ung recognized the evil forces partially. He attempted to escape through a forest by the village that led to a mountain. On his way out Grakdur 'ung got caught. There was no escape for Grakdur 'ung, he was captured and enslaved immediately by the Combine forces. He was then taken back to the combine stronghold and began to take orders for work.

Write a few vortigaunt rp situation's (The more you write the better) :

Situation 1 Enslaved Vort

CCA.C17:I4-UNION-04.275: "Biotic!"

Grakdur 'ung: /me looks at the strange creature.

CCA.C17:I4-UNION-04.275: "Go clan that window, now!"

Grakdur 'ung: "Sen, right away powerful one"

Grakdur 'ung: /me raises cloth and begins to clean the window.

Grakdur 'ung: /me cleans the window, trembling with slight fear.

Grakdur 'ung: "Like this master?"

CCA.C17:I4-UNION-04.275: /y Keep cleaning!

Grakdur 'ung: /me continues to clean the window without stopping

Grakdur 'ung: "All done master"

CCA.C17:I4-UNION-04.275: /me raises hand to the Vortigaunt.

Grakdur 'ung: /me cowers in fear and silence.

CCA.C17:I4-UNION-04.275: "Worthless creature, go back and get more work."


Grakdur 'ung: /me scampers away and heads back for more work.

Situation 2 Free Vort

Grakdur 'ung: /me climbs out of his shack.

Grakdur 'ung: /me begins to walk around.

Grakdur 'ung: /me finds a strange human.

Grakdur 'ung: "Human, Helllllllooooo"

Laquiefa Talanga: /me looks over at the creature.

Laquiefa Talanga: /y Stay away from me!

Laquiefa Talanga: /me runs off.

Grakdur 'ung: "Silly humannnnn."

Grakdur 'ung: /me runs after the human.

Grakdur 'ung: /me catches the human.

Grakdur 'ung: "I want to hellllllp you humannn."

Laquiefa Talanga: "Get out of here!"

Laquiefa Talanga: /me runs away.

Grakdur 'ung: "Noooo human i just wants to helpppp."

Grakdur 'ung: /me attempts to persuade the human

Grakdur 'ung: /roll (57)

Grakdur 'ung: "Its okay humannn, let me help you"

Laquiefa Talanga: "With what??"

Grakdur 'ung: "I know what the human is up to, and i can help!"


<:: Ic Section ::>
Vortigaunt Name : Grakdur 'ung
Vortigaunt Age : Unknown
Vortigaunt Height : 5'11
Why does your vortigaunt want to serve the union? : Umm, yes it does
Do you understand that you wii be killed If you work with the resistance? : Yes of course
I,__Grakdur 'ung___ Will server the union as an enslaved biotic.

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Thank you for making an application, Wilfred.



- Go into more detail about what these two roles consist of, and give examples in the free vortiguant section.



- Explain your character more instead of throwing him/her straight into the events of the first game.

- Explain with more detailed what happend when you first went to earth and how you were enslaved.



- Please improve your roleplay situations to be more detailed, serious and compact. Show your true roleplay potential in situations which are more likely to happen.

Make these edits and then I will re-evaluate your application.

Accepted, message me, or Zackz11 to receive your whitelist.